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Sunday 9 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey - Day 6 Activity 1

In today activity I had to write a poem about being scared. I have to pretend that I have never been to New Zealand and I have no idea where to go expect.

This is my poem:

I felt scared by the time I got on the Waka.

People looks so happy expect for me.

People were talking to each other while I was keeping an eye on myself.

My heart was beating when I stand up.

I was so scared and nervous when I got off the Waka.


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9 comments:

  1. daniel11 July 2017 at 18:10

    Hi Sa Kae
    Great poem about coming to New Zealand for the first time. Poems aren't easy to make but you did a pretty good one. Keep up the great work.
    Daniel

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    1. Sa Kae12 July 2017 at 09:16

      Hi Daniel, I am not good at writing the poems but I try my best for this one. Thank you for comment on my blog.

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  2. Robyn Anderson12 July 2017 at 09:01

    WOW Sa Kae! This is very creative. I think I would also have been nervous and scared getting off the waka. Well done for taking part in the Winter Learning Journey. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your posts :)

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    1. Sa Kae12 July 2017 at 09:18

      Hi Mrs Anderson, I'm sure I will be postting lots and lots on my blog for this Winter Learning Journey. I hope you ejoyed reading it. Thank you for comment on my blog Mrs Anderson.

      Sa Kae

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  3. Eric13 July 2017 at 13:34

    Hi Sa Kea,
    Great poem, it is really cool. I think it will be really cool finding a new country. Well Done!
    Eric

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  4. Ohhsen16 July 2017 at 15:20

    Hi Sa Kae. Like you I would be scared if it was my first time going to New Zealand. I really like your poem. Keep up the great work you have been posting.

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  5. Unknown20 July 2017 at 10:08

    Hey Sa Kae!

    This is a really nice poem! I like the contrast between you being scared and the people being excited to see you. I can imagine it would be a bit of a scary experience not knowing what might be ahead!

    Well done!

    Nicky :)

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    1. Sa Kae20 July 2017 at 10:35

      Hi Nicky, yeah, I know is it a nice poem. I try my best to write this poem because I am not good at writing.

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  6. aminiasi20 July 2017 at 15:58

    Hello Sa Kae, this is a really nice poem. I also would of felt scared but at the same time, I would feel really excited. Keep on working hard.

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